Listen to What I Say: My First English Poem

Friday, September 2, 2016

My Parent

you are my everything

if i wrong you always advice

remind me about goodnes

i am proud to have you

always accompany while happy or sad

always make me smile

always giving spirit

i love mom and dad

UnknownSeptember 6, 2016 at 7:57 AM
I like your poem because your poem remind me of my parents.
In the fourth line you typed *i am pround to have you, are you sure with the word "pround"?
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UnknownSeptember 6, 2016 at 9:18 AM
i like your poem, but i can't understand with the word "pround"?
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Meta WulandariSeptember 6, 2016 at 3:28 PM
i am sorry
i a typo i mean is proud not pround
thank you for adjusted my poem
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